Hidden-Shadow
Posts : 43 Join date : 2012-02-23 Age : 29 Location : Florida
Stats Poke: 1000 Team: Team Renegade Inventory:
| Subject: Noah, and Sophia Tue Mar 06, 2012 2:29 am | |
| Name: Noah, And Sophia
Species: both are Sandslash
Pokedex Number: 208
Gender: Male, and Female
Rank&Team Name: Guild member (Team Paragon)
Ability: sand veil
Level: Noah:42 Sophia:40
Moves: both Poison Sting, Rollout, Crush Claw, Slash.
History: The two being born twins but were complete opposites from the beginning. Where one lacked the other made up for. Noah was Timid, Emotionless, Smart, and Free thinking. While Sophia was outgoing, energetic, Naive, and a bit stubborn. Even though they were complete opposites they still were the same.
Their parents could only tell who was who thanks to the fact that one was shinny and the other wasn't. Sophia was a bit darker with red spikes, while Noah was the usual type of pokemon. Their parents treated her with more attention so Noah became timid, while Sophia was becoming more outgoing. Even though this happened she swore she didn't know why they treated her better.
It wasn't long before they both got too old to be with their parents so they both moved out and went to the guild to take them in. There they made a team name and became a exploring team. But this is only a prologue to their story.
'Stormageddon'
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Ripple Admin
Posts : 2552 Join date : 2011-04-05 Age : 24 Location : Gallifrey~
Stats Poke: 705 Team: ShadowFern/BlazeBurn/Voltage /Obsidian Inventory:
| Subject: Re: Noah, and Sophia Tue Mar 06, 2012 3:17 am | |
| Hidden... Your ability has to be a real ability found in pokemon. In fact, a sandslash has to have the ability Sand Veil: Raises the Pokémon’s evasion during a sandstorm by one level. That's all I'm seeing wrong other than the fact that you need to remember you can only have one shiny. Of course, i don't have much time so i couldn't read too carefully xD | |
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Hidden-Shadow
Posts : 43 Join date : 2012-02-23 Age : 29 Location : Florida
Stats Poke: 1000 Team: Team Renegade Inventory:
| Subject: Re: Noah, and Sophia Tue Mar 06, 2012 3:41 am | |
| *Edited and I only do have 1 shiny. | |
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SereneLittleRose Admin
Posts : 6515 Join date : 2011-02-24 Age : 26 Location : The TARDIS
Stats Poke: 1280 Team: ShadowFern/DesertWind /Voltage/Obsidian/Storm /Oncoming Storm Inventory:
| Subject: Re: Noah, and Sophia Tue Mar 06, 2012 7:43 am | |
| Dang, my reserve name was used by someone xDD Oh well.
Anyhow. Are you sure you want to practically fill up your team spots with all your own characters, because believe me it's much more complicated than it looks. If you wanted, Noah and Sophia could be their own team... | |
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Hidden-Shadow
Posts : 43 Join date : 2012-02-23 Age : 29 Location : Florida
Stats Poke: 1000 Team: Team Renegade Inventory:
| Subject: Re: Noah, and Sophia Wed Mar 07, 2012 1:46 am | |
| Ok I'll make them their own team.
*Edited. | |
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SereneLittleRose Admin
Posts : 6515 Join date : 2011-02-24 Age : 26 Location : The TARDIS
Stats Poke: 1280 Team: ShadowFern/DesertWind /Voltage/Obsidian/Storm /Oncoming Storm Inventory:
| Subject: Re: Noah, and Sophia Wed Mar 07, 2012 9:13 pm | |
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